First Issue! Comic Etoilia Chapter 14

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Chapter 14: This Time We'll Make Up For Sure![edit | edit source]

Sugar.png Sugar:
Uuuu~ Where has Salt gone to?
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
Sugar-chan, do you have an idea where Salt-chan might've gone to?
Sugar.png Sugar:
Hmmm......Sugar doesn't know.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
That reminds me, this area is where we first met, if I recall correctly.
Sugar.png Sugar:
Yeah. It's Sugar's favourite spot after all. Sugar always comes here when Sugar is down......Ah!
Salt.png Salt:
......Sugar.
Sugar.png Sugar:
Salt......
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
(Salt-chan has been found now......but can they properly make up with each other this time......?)
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
(They were quarrelling just moments ago, so this could get very awkward if they're not over it yet......)
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
(Abababababa w-what now....I should at least step in and say something......)
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
U-Ummm.......Sugar-chan, Salt-chan......
Sugar.png Sugar:
So you were here all along~! Geez! Sugar's been looking everywhere for you, Salt!
Salt.png Salt:
Sugar......Salt doesn't like the state we're in right now.
Salt.png Salt:
Salt would much prefer being with Sugar, as always.
Salt.png Salt:
Sugar, Salt apologises to you. ......Salt was wrong during this period of time.
Sugar.png Sugar:
No, Sugar was being stubborn as well. Sorry, Salt.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
H-Huh!? Somehow they made up far easier than I expected?
Salt.png Salt:
Salt and Sugar often quarrel with each other.
Salt.png Salt:
Our quarrel this time has just protracted a bit, so that doesn't mean Salt hates Sugar or anything.
Sugar.png Sugar:
Sugar loves Salt too! We will never hate each other.
Sugar.png Sugar:
Come to think of it, why are you here, Salt?
Salt.png Salt:
T-That's because......uhh.......Salt often comes here when Salt is feeling down......
Sugar.png Sugar:
Eh, what?
Salt.png Salt:
N-No. Salt made a mistake. Salt shall correct it. ......Salt has a firm grasp of Sugar's actions.
Salt.png Salt:
For that reason Salt has already calculated that Sugar would come for Salt if Salt stays here.
Sugar.png Sugar:
Heeh, that's awesome. Way to go, Salt.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
Then, is my first encounter with you here also a part of the calculations that Sugar-chan would come?
Salt.png Salt:
W-Well, you're not wrong.
Salt.png Salt:
(......Though at that time it wasn't Sugar who showed up, which resulted in unpredictable occurrences like what's currently taking place.......)
Salt.png Salt:
Sugar does things that are unaccounted in Salt's calculations all the time. ......That's why it's problematic for Salt.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
Eh? Salt-chan, did you say something?
Salt.png Salt:
......It's nothing, just Salt's self-talk.
Sugar.png Sugar:
......Oh right! Salt, your birthday is right around the corner isn't it!?
Salt.png Salt:
Though Sugar's birthday is also on the same day......
Sugar.png Sugar:
Sugar has something to give you. It's a present! Will you take it?
Salt.png Salt:
Salt also has something to give you. Please take it.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
(.....Seems like they're able to make up for the time being.....I'm happy for them......)
(Transition)
Sugar.png Sugar:
Kaos-oneechan, thanks for sticking around with us!
Salt.png Salt:
Thank you, Kaos. Without your help Salt wouldn't be able to give Sugar the manga.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
No, it's fine, no worries.
Sugar.png Sugar:
Come to think of it, how's your manuscript going, Kaos-oneechan?
Sugar.png Sugar:
You said you were working on one when you came and helped Sugar.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
......Eh? Ahhh I-I totally forgot!!
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
W-W-What should I do now......!! My own manuscript totally slipped my mind!
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
I still haven't gotten anything done, even though they'll be back very soon!
Sugar.png Sugar:
Onee-chan, your manuscript isn't done yet?
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
What now what now! Ahh sheesh, I have no worth to live in this world anymore.......
Salt.png Salt:
If that's the case, Salt and Sugar will assist you. This is just a token of our gratitude, for teaching us how to draw manga, and helping us make up.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
I appreciate your concern.......but what do you mean by assist?
Salt.png Salt:
We're giving you advice about your manuscript. Please leave it to us. There's more to Salt than meets the eye.
Sugar.png Sugar:
Now that you mentioned it, the pacing of Kaos-oneechan's manuscript is a bit too fast that Sugar couldn't follow.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
Eh?
Salt.png Salt:
Also, there was a scene where the characters make up but that's not it. Salt fails to see how they're apologising to each other.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
Uuu......
Sugar.png Sugar:
Sugar gets what you want to convey, but you're perhaps getting ahead of yourself.
Salt.png Salt:
You'd be better off organising what you want to draw first, Kaos. The readers won't get it if you don't do that.
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
I-I'm sorry......
Salt.png Salt:
An apology is unnecessary. If you're able to respond to Salt and Sugar's feelings, we'd love to see the fruits of your hard work.
Sugar.png Sugar:
Yeah yeah! Give it your all, Kaos-oneechan!
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
(!! Animal eared girls are cheering me on......!!)
Moeta Kaoruko.png Kaos:
Yes! I will do my best!
Meanwhile......
Npc woman avatar.png ???:
Yes! I will do my best!
Irokawa Ruki.png Ruki:
They've gone through many hardships, but in the end they achieved happiness, perhaps?
Koizuka Koyume.png Koyume:
She really has vast experiences in romance, as the rumours suggest.
Katsuki Tsubasa.png Tsubasa:
I never got to hear her words of advice as an adventurer though, since all she's been talking about are love stories......
Kirara.png Kirara:
Moreover, although she seems happy now, she was also the one who attacked us in the first place......
Translation by - Mann -
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First Issue! Comic Etoilia
Chapter 13
The Reason Why We Quarrelled
Chapter 14
This Time We'll Make Up For Sure!
Chapter 15
What Becomes of the Manuscript......?